I gave it a shot! I really enjoy the atmosphere your created, really well done. Something I would suggest though is delivering the story more naturally as the play explores. It definitely interupts the flow when we have to read the story in between each level. Overall though, very well done!
The whole game was so peaceful, charming and amazing. Walking around was so serene and the environment was so vibrant! Even the storyw as pretty good and become quite emotinoal towards the end and such a bitter sweet ending. The way the music was used as well. especially towards the end; it was perfect.
Only things i could suggest is to maybe have the bot that the player finds at the beginning to follow you for a distance and maybe then stop functioning as it runs out of fuel or something like that. Making the players interact witht he bot more would make an emotional connection and tie that part up better. And there were probably astronaut parts around, but keeping them in the actual path to the triangles would encourage more exploration in the maps to find more of the pieces; and adding a story to each piece you find of the previous astronauts would also add a depth to the story.
The above is just a suggestion, the game is great just as it is and it was honestly really fun and great to play and experiene the world you built. Great game and great job! Good luck for any other projects you might have planned!
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I tried playing this, but there seems to be an audio-only component that makes this game inaccessible to D/deaf people.
You have a really good point, I will definitely work on that in my future games.
Hey Dev,
I gave it a shot! I really enjoy the atmosphere your created, really well done. Something I would suggest though is delivering the story more naturally as the play explores. It definitely interupts the flow when we have to read the story in between each level. Overall though, very well done!
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I appreciate your feedback, thank you!
The whole game was so peaceful, charming and amazing. Walking around was so serene and the environment was so vibrant! Even the storyw as pretty good and become quite emotinoal towards the end and such a bitter sweet ending. The way the music was used as well. especially towards the end; it was perfect.
Only things i could suggest is to maybe have the bot that the player finds at the beginning to follow you for a distance and maybe then stop functioning as it runs out of fuel or something like that. Making the players interact witht he bot more would make an emotional connection and tie that part up better. And there were probably astronaut parts around, but keeping them in the actual path to the triangles would encourage more exploration in the maps to find more of the pieces; and adding a story to each piece you find of the previous astronauts would also add a depth to the story.
The above is just a suggestion, the game is great just as it is and it was honestly really fun and great to play and experiene the world you built. Great game and great job! Good luck for any other projects you might have planned!
Excellent feedback!! I really enjoyed your video.
Cute game, unlike others I didn't encounter any lag problems
Amazing little adventure, although the lag did make it a bit less enjoyable.
none the less, outstanding game!
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This game is super underrated
This is the best game I have played on itch, the only problem is that it is super laggy and I think it is the grass that is causing it.
Thanks a lot! In the future there will be updates to improve performance.
wow sad story ending
wow, this looks good!
Thanks! :)
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Good game and a good story, despite being short. Congrats.
Thanks a lot for sharing! :D
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deep storyI hope you enjoyed it, thank you very much for sharing!
Beautifully designed landscapes with a nice easy goal. Really nice. Thanks.
Good Luck
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Thanks to you wobbly
Amaing game dev :D
I hope you enjoyed the game